Friday, February 26, 2010

Feedback Letter from Boss regarding Project

A polite yet direct email from the boss regarding a work project

Hello Sam,

Thank you for the time and all the thought you've put into your suggestions. Here is my feedback regarding the project titles:

• I agree with Ted from marketing that the project titles are a bit long and would be a problem for registration. And from a recall standpoint, it might not work.

• How about a title that is related to the region of the brand? Or that focuses on the age group.

• Please refer to the last user survey for ideas.

I am still keeping the list of names you sent on active until you come up with new ones by Monday.


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